Guidelines for Readers

 
1. Check to see what the writer is asking for in terms of feedback, and get into a mindset to do your part to meet the request. Don't overstep.

2. Read the piece carefully and thoroughly. Once may not be enough. Make notations in readable handwriting.

3. Point out problems and issues as objectively as possible. Be specific. Offer solutions or resources if you are aware of any. Ask questions! It's much easier to hear something like this:
"I noticed that the point of view switched three times in this paragraph--is that what you were trying for?
Compare that with:
"You're head-hopping---rotten technique."
You could even go a step further and suggest ways to smooth out the POV or whatever other misstep you find.

4. Because you are a good human being, look for positive as well as constructive items to comment upon. If something strikes you as appropriately funny or touching or wows you, say so!

5. The evening that you share your critique, speak directly to the writer and do so calmly and with respect.

 
 
Home     |     General Schedule      |     Syllabus     |     Critiquing     |     Lori's Articles Copyright (c) 2008 Lori L. Lake. All rights reserved.